|Reviews for Spontaneity|
| Princess of Hell chapter 3 . 7/2/2003
::whimpers:: ...Is this a Royce/Edan ficcie? ::wipes eyes:: I was hoping it was going to be Damar/Edan... ::sniffle:: Well... I guess it's all right then... Oh well, it's really good and I love Edan's personality ::grin:: very amusing.
Write more and I'll put you on my favorites list to keep an eye on ya _
| Ayakaishi Fei chapter 3 . 6/29/2003
Okay, maybe Edan is a little crazy, but he's very, very lovable. I absolutely love your characterisation - you've created a wonderful spoiled brat, without making him the least bit unlikable. Congratulations on that! Royce is absolutely brilliant - he sounds hot! - I love the way you write, Edan makes me laugh so much! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Isarandel chapter 3 . 6/28/2003
this is nice. i wonder what's gonna happen next...
| Pundit chapter 3 . 6/27/2003
HAHAHA! *cackles madly* So frickin' funny! I love the little pyro! He's hysterical! I hope you do a little more written in the 3rd person to balance out Edan's skewed view of Royce. I think this story is funny as hell and btw *glares* if you don't finish this story I WILL hunt you down and MAKE you! _ ... Not that I'm threatening you or anything (but I am).
Can't wait for the next chapter! Please post it soon! _
| Seraen chapter 3 . 6/27/2003
Silk...drapes...burn...I have to try that...*evil grin* I wonder which lighter I should use...the purple one? No, the black one...oo; nevermind that. .()Anyways, great chapter! You're right, Edan is a bit...uh, not sane .6 Keep up the great work!Update soon!
| Tsubisha-hime chapter 3 . 6/27/2003
"Oh, and she's so thin and sm! I wonder if everyone is a midget where she comes from!"
Hehe, I've been repeating that line to my older sister (she's 15 and still 4"11!)! Only now I have these bruises where she hit me...ow...
I'm so glad u like Dir en Grey! my other friends think they're freaks!
Royce is now one of my favorite characters, he is so cool! Not to mention he sounds completely hot *drool*. Too bad he belongs to you and Edan T.T!
Update again! Ur such a cool author!
| Jess chapter 3 . 6/27/2003
LOL I'm glad he or SHE got all her anger out LOL please your doing a great job it's really funny it should be a comedy lol PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| foxdance chapter 2 . 6/22/2003
Love it love it love it! You have a witty way of telling the story. Personally, i think first-person narratives are the best for humour. Keep it up!
| Ayakaishi Fei chapter 2 . 6/21/2003
I liked this chapter! Squee. It's very cute. Edan is such a cutie, and next chapter it looks like we'll get some Royce/Edan interaction, along with Princess Edan. So cute!
Write more! This story is so, so cute!
| Seraen chapter 2 . 6/20/2003
. Damar cooties! That was so cute! This was a really great chapter, write more soon!-.-
| JAM chapter 2 . 6/20/2003
| Seph chapter 2 . 6/20/2003
me like your story
would make seph really happy if you continue. i hope you sontinue soon. some take a long time to continue. i think it will be a lovely story but i have no idea what's going to happen since they don't know each other yet so please update...me bookmark it i'm going back to this site again so PLEASE CONTINUE!
| Tsubisha-hime chapter 2 . 6/19/2003
DON'T EVEN THINK OF NOT CONTINUING THIS! It's so sugoi . . .
Edan's a real bishounen, ne? So pretty _! Update soon, I wanna see some fluff! WAFF is good.
BTW (i just had to say this) do you like Dir en Grey (the j-rock band)? I DO!
| Artemis chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
Huh, that's certainly about to become interesting, I wonder if he'll give in to the urge and throttle his poor servant. He did beat his brother up for calling him a girl, after all, and now his servant wants him to dress up as a girl.
Hope I'll read more soon.
| Esaema chapter 1 . 6/18/2003
I really think you should continue. You've got a great start so far and I want to read the rest of the story.