|Reviews for Spontaneity|
| Seraen chapter 2 . 6/20/2003
. Damar cooties! That was so cute! This was a really great chapter, write more soon!-.-
| JAM chapter 2 . 6/20/2003
| Seph chapter 2 . 6/20/2003
me like your story
would make seph really happy if you continue. i hope you sontinue soon. some take a long time to continue. i think it will be a lovely story but i have no idea what's going to happen since they don't know each other yet so please update...me bookmark it i'm going back to this site again so PLEASE CONTINUE!
| Tsubisha-hime chapter 2 . 6/19/2003
DON'T EVEN THINK OF NOT CONTINUING THIS! It's so sugoi . . .
Edan's a real bishounen, ne? So pretty _! Update soon, I wanna see some fluff! WAFF is good.
BTW (i just had to say this) do you like Dir en Grey (the j-rock band)? I DO!
| Artemis chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
Huh, that's certainly about to become interesting, I wonder if he'll give in to the urge and throttle his poor servant. He did beat his brother up for calling him a girl, after all, and now his servant wants him to dress up as a girl.
Hope I'll read more soon.
| Esaema chapter 1 . 6/18/2003
I really think you should continue. You've got a great start so far and I want to read the rest of the story.
| Fallen Angel 229 chapter 1 . 6/18/2003
This is a really good story so far. I like it. Please update soon!
| Seraen chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
Such coolness! You are are a really good shounen-ai writer, don't doubt yourself one bit. Your story started off really well and left me looking for more chapters (and more Edan! -)
Update soon please!
| Tsubisha-hime chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
~ I can say is that you have serious talent as a shounen-ai writer _. This is a very cool start to a story and I like the characters al lot, especi~y Edan. I hope there's a lot of fluff in this. Me like fluff.
| Ayakaishi Fei chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
Wow-ness! Incredibly cute. I like Edan already *beams*
Oh... please, please continue, this is *very* good. I will not only review, I will also put it on my favouritest stories list.
You're a very talented writer. Squee.