Reviews for Unworthy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Pleaseee keep writing! This is awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story is really awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is really really good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah! STOP RESISTING IT, YOU STUPID PRINCE, IT"S GOING TO HAPPEN WHETHER OR NOT YOU WANT IT! ... yeah, anyways, can't wait for more on this! Lee |
![]() ![]() K, that guy is a crazy bastard, and as such, I love him. It is probably foolish of me to ask that you update, since it has been so long, but I may as well try. This story is very original. Me likee. Signed,anonymous bystander |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like this story! good job keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's probably too late to tell you this but the word chimeres in french doesn't mean moonlight in enhlish. In fact it means chimera and sometimes it can also means illusions. |
![]() ![]() more chapters please , loving it :Dyou have a great imagination |
![]() ![]() I like this...it's got a good storyline and Prince is really harsh and cruel but Chimeres isnt fazed by it, he sounds should update ya know? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, now he has both brothers as slaves. Maybe the two will at least get to comfort each other now. |
![]() ![]() hahaha..dude, that guy has a serious ego problem..."They stare at me with their empty eyes, drooling in desire of my regal demeanor, and reach out to touch me. The bravest ones snarl at me and try to drag me into the cell. I do not even let them get an inch closer before either chopping their hands off with my sword or shooting them." Heh heh...some parts are just so funny! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish you would finish this -.- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm. I never considered Minou meant kitten. I guess that's a nice translation. I will never see this word the same way again. Anyway! This Prince gets even more cool! I hope Cyrus's gonna die. I don't like Cyrus... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hum. Go blood thirsty in possession of full power ruler! Yeah!This is nice, and nicely written, contrarily to too much of first-person and present tense I've read. I can't wait to read the next chapters... *fingers itching to press on the next chapter button* Just to tell you, Chimeres de la Coeur, in French, doesn't mean Moonlight of the Heart. I should know, since French's my first-language. |
![]() ![]() ![]() must! update! the story is filled with emotions and thats the way i love em! |