Reviews for Piano
joie 610 chapter 1 . 7/6/2003
ooh! i love how you described the piano as a 'black and white sidewalk.' awesom haiku &D
CoolBeans18s chapter 1 . 6/30/2003
Wow! That was really great!

~ CoolBeans18s
CancerianQueen chapter 1 . 6/25/2003
So true! I love this.

Well done!

Ellerfru chapter 1 . 6/24/2003
cool... (I love my 2 pianos...)
Aryaveiel Skycryer chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
I liked it up until the last line. That was just too informative to be poetic.
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
I liked that first line the best.

~Heart of the Sword
Kay Harlow chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
I loved your choice of words and descriptions. I especially liked the line of "Black and white sidewalk". This is a really great haiku.
Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
The first line just blow me off completely -

Excellent piece!
The Broken Princess chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
I love the way you worded things. Keep writing!


*~Immortal Spirit~*
kijochan chapter 1 . 6/16/2003
Nice imagery. Theres a sense of freedom expressed into it, too. Well done.