lol That lizzie Anders is really, really wacky!

this story is the shit! i swear if u don't update this story soon i'll never read it again! honestly...
But seriously this story is so funny, and i mean come on, look at all the ppl who have reviewed, they love ur story too!

I apologize for the lack of reviews in about four months. However, I do not feel TOO badly because in that four months, you only updated one chapter. Still, it was a good chapter. Please, keep updating.
~Beau Coeur

Yes, they should be a couple, because duh, they really do love each other but don't realize it yet. *rolls eyes* Duh.
Just kidding! But yeah, they should be a couple. The whole cliched thing... uh-huh. I'll stop rambling now.

Ah, that's okay. The bold was becoming annoying. But now it's gone. So I won't have to stab my eyes out after all... *looks regretfully at forks* Darn. I really wanted to see what the back of them looks like... waitaminute, if I pull them out, I can't see them! Hmm... maybe if I just stab one of them, then look at it, then stab the other?
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Anyway, good chapter. I'm glad she didn't get the lead in the school play, or I would have killed myself slowly with a pencil through the eye. Not really... you get the point.

Um... I think you accidentally did this in poetry format. Look at it yourself. Ugh.

Oh, they're in deep now. Muahahahaa...

In my last review I called Ric Mitch. oops- that's what I get for reading too many cliched romances at the same time! Silly me.
White...space...brain...not...comprehending...
I'm guessing that Belinda only stalks Patrick because Meggin likes him. Am I right? Am I?

Okay. I'm going to suggest to you how to make it easier to see the change in POV, since bold letters are very hard to read.
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Simply do this:
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Mitch
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Mitch's POV here.
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Meggin
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Meggin's POV here.
I'm trying not to be sarcastic, okay? _ Anyway, that should work much better. It'll be easier to read. Just do that at the intro of each section, and bam! It's fun for everyone. It shouldn't be too hard to fix the last chapters, either.
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*is trying to smile* *fails* Okay, I'll admit it- the bold words annoy me. *sighs*

Australia? I have no idea what it would be like down there, so I'll just assume that you'll protray it right and not even think about it, okay?
Hmm... I like the story, but I have two suggestions:
A) Call the car a "flashy white sports car" and take out the AN. It won't take much effort, and it's good enough for a girl to know the car is flashy, right? After all, we don't expect her to know the year or everything, and it's her POV and she's only like seven.
B) Tell us by putting the character's naem at the top of the section that you've changed POV. It wasn't really obvious until I realized it at... oh, say, the end. It's hard to tell who is talking. So you might want to mention that...

O I just read your bio. I LOVE SARAH DESSEN! My favorite book is 'This Lullaby'. *sighs* I want a Dexter... And about the Da Vinci Code. I got a copy at Costco *blush* They have around a whole aisle full of em at my place. Maybe if you can get to a warehouse store thingy they might have the Da Vinci Code for a pretty cheap price. ) They got a lot of Harry Potter books too. The Da Vinci Code is absolutely fabulous. To read it is to believe it. I have never read a real thriller before, but this one is so good. There are a lot of twists and interesting puzzles. ) Everyone loves a good mystery.
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BTW, I'm Broken Spiral/Cracked Circle/or whatever name I put in my review. That's why I didn't bother adding any comments in here bout your actual story. xP This is my other file. Lol
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It doesn't mean I don't love your story enough to not declare my undying...love...twice. I do, I really do. And I REALY hope you update soon.

You evil, evil little person. First I get addicted to this story, and then I choke on my spit laughing at M & R's sarcastic-wit. God, you're so funny. You know what? You just inspired me. *gets up and marches to the TV* I shall now watch Beavis and Butthead, however low my I.Q. will stoop! Cause I feel all happy and stuff! Yeah! Natural high! Whoo, even though I snort when I laugh, it's still this kind of high for me! Whoo! Update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update *takes deep breath* update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update! *bounces off walls*
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*composes self* What really sucks is that I already maxed my fav stories list, so I won't be able to check up on your story when you put up a new chapter...hey, hey! That's what Author Alerts are for! *cheers up and pats self on back for such an ingenious idea*
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Update and I'll love you for it muchlies! ~~Loner

i love the fic, its so funny! update soon plz

i luv this story! very humorous & enjoyable! Can't wait to see what happens next! please continue! update soon!

heylo i really like ur story its really kool
update soon please
o yeah i think they would cuz they r opposites nd opposites attract or some crap like dat