Reviews for A Cliché Waiting To Happen |
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![]() ![]() Hey, what happened? It's been like 5 months since you've updated! You HAVE TO UPDATE! lol This story is great! I was gonna piss myself laughing it's so funny. Go and update! Bleeding Poetic |
![]() ![]() you really need to review soon. My sister introduced me to your story and i really like it. it's a new take on the same old cliche. I was never very interested in fiction press but your story made me like it, but if you don't update soon i'll lose faith in the fiction press authors. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LMFAO!You're the coolest!I love this story very much!This is hilarious and also cute in its own way!Keep up the great work!I'll definitely leap for joy when the next chapter is put up!Love ya(Dearly not queerly.) and God Bless!C-ya next time! ~Chelsea aka Freshman . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutley hilarious! Cant wait for more! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() i cant believe ric asked his dad if he had had sex with his mother or not. hilarious! ur humor is rare. some people just try too hard *cough*ME*cough*choking!*. see *neon yellow sign pointing to choking session* ill just stop there. _ the whole thing about belinda "stealing" Patrick Hayden from Meggin is superb! it gives more reality to ur story..and actually makes out belinda as human with desires and not just the best friend who would never do anything selfish even once! and who's basiclly perfect. gag me. anyways...great story! looking forward to more laughs and counsler session (i keep on thinking sensations...yuck) please update sOO!N |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol. horray for aus? It's a good start and I think the piss balloon really showed him to be .. well, annoying. I liked the train idea, to me it seemed to illustrate he had muscles - don't ask, you just made the movement seem very.. fluent. So yes, I now have an image of a very annoying but also very good looking male character. However, while I've got an insight into her personality, we don't really know what she looks like. It's a good opening chapter and explores the characters well. (r&r back?) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i had to comment on this chapter! just couldnt resist! the humor and sarcasm..it's amazing! hope to see it through out the whole story! on to more chapter! |
![]() ![]() LOL i LURVE IT! its hillarious! i do hope the next chapter comes out soon. keep writin! . |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is hilarious! And NOT hilarious in a hahayoucan'twrite way but hilarious in a way. Anyway, update or face the consequences! Mwahahaha! *cackles* *Shale* |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was really good, but there were a few grammer mistakes that really stuck out. Consider proof-reading your chapters before you post. Other than that though, your story is great, as well as your chapter. ~Beau Coeur |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story so far... I can't wait for another counseling session lol Update soon! : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Luved it..meggin & ric are hilarious ) update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG OMG OMG I CUD TAKE OUT LOADS OF CHUNKS OF THIS AND QUOTE THEM ITS SO FUNNY! This has 2 be one of the funniest fics ive evaread on ffpress iss just so GUD! UPDATE SOON K I MUST KNOW WAT HAPPENS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD! Belinda u * i MUST READ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG I SO LUV THIS FIC! I LUV THE SARCASM! Theres 2 many funny things 4 me 2 quote on. damn thass funny thay were STALKING him? i still cant get over that pencil sharpening thing! lolz this is definitely in my faves! |