Reviews for A Cliché Waiting To Happen
luvurflyingmonkey123 chapter 6 . 1/30/2004
I like this story a lot. It's an interesting twist on the same old plot. In eavh chapter, something new happens, which makes me want to read more.
Meggin annoys me. I don't know what it is, she just seems whiny and such, and I just don't like her that much. I like Ric though. He seems like a real person somehow.
I do think, however, that you could enhance both characters a lot. Try using a lot more description, such as subtle details about their rooms ("I flopped onto my bed and stared absently at my poster of such and such band..." as an example.) You should also give the reader some clue as to what they look like and stuff.
There were a few grammar and spelling mistakes but there really weren't that many. Also, what's going on with the bold when Ric's speaking? sometimes it's there, sometimes it isn't, and sometimes one paragraph is bolded, and then there's one that isn't and the next is. I don't really like the bolding because it makes it hard to read.
Welp, I hope you update soon, you've got a good story going on here, and i can't wait to read more.
Bomb in the Garden chapter 6 . 1/28/2004
Okay...WOW! This is such a good story...the sarcastic remarks are absolutely fantastic! I just love it! I'm definitely adding this to my fav's list! And go Aussies!
Please, please, please update as soon as possible!
Beau Coeur chapter 5 . 1/25/2004
Oh, it's just-it's just soo good. As usual. It's just as I expected and I just-oh I can't even talk lol You're such a good writer. I love how you ended this chapter too.
Keep up the great work
~Beau Coeur~
LookAtTheStars chapter 7 . 1/22/2004
This story is cute. I like the way you've written the characters thoughts, very amusing. Can't wait to read more.
And Meggin and I have the same sarcasm. Maybe that's why I like her character!
Me Acorn and Sometimes Banana chapter 7 . 1/19/2004
OMG! I actually laughed out loud! I mean, I find a lot of things funny but I almost never laugh out loud at a story! Especially when my parents are sitting in the next room...
UPDATE! I can't wait for the next counseling sesion *grins in anticipation*
mariedel chapter 7 . 1/19/2004
My stomach really really hurts now because of you. It’s all your fault! Your fic just has to be too damn funny! Like Shrek. Love that movie. Hehehe. I’m really impressed. I love the whole sarcastic thing you got going on and the characters are all loveable in their own kinda unique way. Ric is such a cocky ass but he’s so dorky at the same time. Fads. lol. I love Meggin’s sardonic attitude. I envy it at the same time too. And it’s set in Australia! Woohoo! Anyway, keep up the really great work, it’s fav material.
PS: If I sound really weird, blame it on the weather. It’s finally cool for once than bloody smouldering hot.
heigaiz chapter 7 . 1/19/2004
gasp... i must... read.. MORE! interesting.. this is a funny story.. i really wanna see where this is headed... not that i cant already figure it out... but... GAH! JUST UPDATE and i will luv u forever! XD...
MemphisBelle chapter 7 . 1/18/2004
Hey, great story! I'm surprised it has only those (relatively) few rewiews, because I have to tell you that of all the stories I've rean on , yours would be on the top five at least. And I'm very picky. *grins* Anyways, I hope the others are gonna get the message too, keep writing please. :)
Midnight Owl chapter 7 . 1/16/2004
another fun chapter. update soon plz.
Aurelione chapter 7 . 1/16/2004
AH! I LOVE this story! It's ben a long time since there's been a romance fic as god as Blazing-Moon's "The Courting of Aviahnna Rubenne"...and your's is IT! This story absolutely ROCKS! (which is why it's going on my favorites).
Courting Insanity chapter 7 . 1/14/2004
Good update! Sorry it took me awhile to review. The humor's still in there. Love that about your story. Yay Meggin for snooping around! Hehe.. and umm.. oh, for getting rid of Belinda. Good job and whoo.. can't wait for an update!
starswimmer89 chapter 7 . 1/14/2004
LOL very cute story :D
tricklingdust chapter 7 . 1/13/2004
I just read all of this in one go, and it kept me laughing the entire time! My mom gave me funny looks, even. XD Great job writing, please update soon!
Nickety chapter 1 . 1/13/2004
My free period is almost over so I can't say much, but I'm on the first chapter and it's excellent so far. Funny in a dry way.
Can't wait to continue.
blackanarchy chapter 7 . 1/12/2004
Lols! Cute chapter. Ticket seller huh? Impt job alrites, I love the way it almost becomes a cliche and then goes all wacky. In a good way. I love your sense of sarcasm! :) Keep updating!
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