Reviews for Slip Away
Lirem chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
this is an awesome song. Wow. I'd love to hear it out loud, with notes ot it which make sense instead of my brain squeaking and trying to think of a melody which fits. but I really like the imagery of two faces, one for the outside world, just enough to cover up the inside one, the real one.

:)
krazykat751 chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
Hey! This is totally rad, I totally rate it. You have a hell of a lot of poetry though, may take me a while to get through!
demonchild666 chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
whoa...great song, your band's gonna be famous some day _
AzraelsConsort chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
Hey, I really liked this. I think everyone feels like this a couple times in their life, but I really like the lyrics. You write well!
the undead chapter 1 . 7/14/2003
This one caught my eye for some reason, probably because it shares the same title as one of my past poems (that happens alot, but it doesn't really matter) I really like the part where you say "It's easier to fall in the black of night/Than to stand to the hate of the day" .. nice. It speaks to me.