Tehe! I love this poem! Its so sweet! *cries* Very good job hun! keep up all tha good work!

Stick to that last stanza. It's a beautiful piece. Great job. _

aw! this is soo good! i can definitely relate to it! im sorry to hear about you and your b/f breaking up, i wish you all the best in life! keep writing too!

~dArLiN69~

That's really beautiful ). I like the ending, especially. This is kind of how I feel right now. So thanks for posting such a touching poem. _

Aww wow, this is so sweet and so from the heart, it shows such pain, but the ending lines give such hope, love this!

o0o0o0o0o i like :) -lol- it's sad, yetin a way oppstimistic. very good. im not sure what else to say,-keep thoughts on paper

~paper