Reviews for A Frail White Rose
RACHEL RACHEL chapter 1 . 8/13/2003
For a work of art like this, I can say only one thing: perfection.
Summerdazed chapter 1 . 7/26/2003
this is so beautiful...(p.s. if you're free, will you R&R my work too? :O)


one more thing, can I get your permission to print out some of your poems.I love them so much and I don't really want to go online everytime I want to read them. :O) I promise they won't go anywhere else, I just want to keep them.

Write back and tell me if the permission is granted. If not, then never mind, thanks anyway and keep up your awesome work. :O)

Mime chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
Wow, great imaginary, I can almost see the rose.

Also, I must admit, some of my earlier haiku aren't very good. Thank you for being honest with me when you reviewed. I think I'm improving these days, but I'll leave that up to you to deside .
Rachel chapter 1 . 7/20/2003
Bravo! Bravo! Excellent! Probably the best I've read from you. Write more of these!
Eternity's Secret chapter 1 . 7/16/2003
Beautiful... absolutely beautiful... I loved it! I think that 'frail' and 'fragile' both are great.

~Duo Maxwell Is Mine No Touchy~
apriltruro chapter 1 . 7/14/2003
Ultimate Schuyler, Love it!

So crisp and beautiful. Reminds me of Japanese haiku. Please write more.
Mom chapter 1 . 7/13/2003
I love this one! The imagery is awesome. You're good, girl!
swift sky silver chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
nice imagery0)
Lady Ivory chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
Short...I like it. Um...write more, I guess. Nice use of words...
CoolBeans18s chapter 1 . 6/30/2003
Don't drown on us! Your haiku is beautiful - I loved the imagry!

~ CoolBeans18s
Werecat99 chapter 1 . 6/29/2003
Oh... That was very beautiful. A perfect little image.
Zainab chapter 1 . 6/18/2003
Very beautiful!
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
That is great work.

~Heart of the Sword
Angelic Wings chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
i liked the rose part, but the rest didn't quite match. i think you should've cut some words out and put in a 'finally' or something. but overall, it's still pretty good! keep up the writing! i can tell you're very good with descriptive words! -
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