i loved the alst verse...this had such beautiful, smoky, hazy descriptions,it was very poignant and beautiufl. unexpected.

~ I like this. Really! It brings about the meaning of the moon and its sentimental feeling once you're under its prescence. One of my favorites...

c. butterfly~**

very nice, the words flow well, nice overall sound to it. not much emotion, without which i am incapable of writing a poem, but you managed quite a nice job of it. good job! :)