Reviews for Deadly Weapons
I cri at mi tymz 4 you chapter 1 . 5/16/2005
Yes there simple are words, but also feelings. Feeling could set you on fire feeling could tear you down, but also you hide your feelings. This is a great poem. Let's just say for the ones i have read so far i haven't read a poem you have wriiten that has dissappointed me.. Good Job
joie 610 chapter 1 . 8/4/2003
a touching poem... so true... great work, emily!
Ellerfru chapter 1 . 6/24/2003
true... but i think the last lines are unnecessary. anyone could have guessed it, your readers aren't exactly stupid, you know? :)
ajcutie07 chapter 1 . 6/20/2003
aint it the truth
scarywhenhyper chapter 1 . 6/18/2003
OMG! SO TRUE!
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 6/18/2003
Wow. I think this is your best yet.

Heart of the Sword
Lex C chapter 1 . 6/18/2003
True, true. I like this, the rhythm and rhyme work well with the words. They make it so powerful!
wildtenderness chapter 1 . 6/18/2003
that was a 'wow'.it was beautifully written.