| Reviews for Afterglow |
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  Elaine chapter 1 . 9/14/2013 I loved your story. It surprised me because the characters were very realistic and it shows how you dont have to look like a model to be beautiful through a man's eyes. Great job! |
 theKnobblyKneedWriter chapter 1 . 5/2/2012 Goodness, this is brilliant :) |
| Emily chapter 1 . 8/22/2009 Did you name her after me? Haha. Just kidding. Anyways, I like the "tenderness" of the story. BUT, it's really uneventful. If I were harsh, I'd say that it's dry and boring. Maybe because you don't even have a plot! Don't be discouraged though. Your style of writing, the way you construct your sentences, they're not too bad. Quite good. But there's always room for improvement. So, all the best. |
| Ca17W chapter 1 . 3/16/2007 I like this story! |
| anacharlie chapter 1 . 8/22/2006 It is beautiful. ) |
| Learah Kaelar chapter 1 . 10/4/2005 Beautifully written, I had tears in my eyes...you're right, it's not about sex at all, it's about much, much more. Your imagery is beautiful, but I'm wondering about the hyphens around the word "this" in the first paragraph. I love your writing, it is honest and heartfelt. Keep it up! Blessed be! |
| emerald chapter 1 . 9/25/2005 *smiles* yes it is beautiful...and marraige just makes a person complete...and gives you the confidence and trust everyone wishes for...loved it! |
| chocolatecreme06 chapter 1 . 1/11/2004 Good story. I like how you described his love for her. It was really sweet! ~Chocolatecreme06 |
| Jessimica chapter 1 . 1/10/2004 wow that story was truly beautiful |
| pixieloveincorporated chapter 1 . 1/6/2004 This was my first time on this site, after searching for a while for a place to publish my little stories. Yours was the first story I read and it created a warm, pleasant feeling when I read your note at the bottom of the page. You manage to sculpt your characters for us so that it is almost as if we are there. If the other stories on this site are as pleasant as yours I think I will enjoy this site very much. Thank you for publishing such a beautiful story. A fellow writer |
| zagato chapter 1 . 12/9/2003 I love this story a lot. Please write more. |
| Cooties chapter 1 . 12/9/2003 That was great! They seemed so in love! I really enjoyed it! |
| Audax Nexcis chapter 1 . 12/8/2003 A beautiful story, it really does express a lot about why people stay together, and the love that holds them there. |
| Caiterz1337 chapter 1 . 11/26/2003 Aw.. This is alot like my story. I love it. So lovey! _ -Cait |
| Demon-Blue 015 chapter 1 . 11/26/2003 Wow! That was deeply touching... i like romances like this... write more please. ~Demon-Blueo15/ kittyshina15 (fp id) |