you say so much with so very little. again i'm in awe. keep writing :D

Such emotion with such few words. I can really feel the pain and anguish in your poem. Especially in the line "and just pray it would be over soon" I can really connect to it. keep up the good work.

This is about domestic violence, right? if so, great job converying it without mentioning it. Otherwise, good tone anyway

So much said with so few words. Well done.

Wow, this is really good. . . I know how this feels. . . Thanks for the review. . . I wish the best for you also. . .

Fantastic. You feel with the person. You can see them. With so few words, you create a whole story. I love it; I wish I had half the talent you posess.

Chelzea

wow, that's unusually thought provoking for how short it is.

oh, and in response to the review you gave me. it's all muddled like that because is being evil. again. believe me, if it were actually in paragraphs, like it's supposed to be, you'd be able to understand it.

thats good. it tells a lot in a short time..keep up the good work.

This was so meaningful, short but it got the message across very well. Keep writing :)"

*cosmo-queen*