|Reviews for Sakura|
| bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
Nice. Pretty and vivid, I like this a lot.
| greenGalilee chapter 1 . 8/20/2006
| Tia LaPorte chapter 1 . 7/16/2006
I love this. It was full of visual imagery. That last line cracks me up ("No, the sakura didn't drown..."). Beautifully done.
| likes to headbang chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
nice imagery.. and that's so awesome.. cuz in the am. vers. of card captors she's called sakura, but in the krn. vers. they call her cherry, and now i know why! thank u and wonderful poem.
| Infection chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
this was really good. full of vivd imagery.
| InspirASIAN chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
| Living in a story called life chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
cool i have a haiku on cherry blossoms but this one probably is better than mine anyways great job!
| the twinkling of an eye chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
| softmusicnroses chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
I like it!I am in choir and we are singing "Sakura"
**adds to favorites**
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Black cherry branch floats,
Rushing in Spring water's flood,
Destiny at sea,—
But each pink bud ferried out,
Was a seed that ne'er fulfilled.
| falconstrife86 chapter 1 . 2/9/2005
Hmm... I definitely like this, but the format is a little off. It may have been better to write it in three haikus that tell one story. Other than that I liked it.
| Queen Flare chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
It's a very nice combination of two different styles. Awesome.
| Ultimate Schuyler chapter 1 . 7/17/2004
This was... nice, I guess, but I didn't truly understand it. Perhaps you could explain it to me? Please RR one of my haikus or senryuus.
| Shandris chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
I'm parcial to Sakura myself...
*looks at screen name*
It's very beautiful!
Love how you utilized the tanka & haiku!
PS could you read my poem Sakura? It's not a haiku but I think you'll enjoy it. PLZ PLZ PLZ ! _
| swinger of birches chapter 1 . 2/12/2004
This is so lovely, Zainab. I don't really have anything specific to say about it, just that it's lovely and conjures a really pretty image in my mind.