Reviews for To Be Loved
SAngel chapter 4 . 7/3/2003
excellent chapter! it shows a lot about the characters!
NeWriter chapter 4 . 7/1/2003
Nice chapter! You got a verb tense wrong here: "Alyxandra, you think everyone was a hottie," its supposed to be "is". Lol. Anyway, I like the way you make the characters! Niles sounds aproving enough D
SAngel chapter 3 . 6/24/2003
lovely chapter! i can't wait to see what will happen!
NeWriter chapter 3 . 6/23/2003
Yeah but you had one little one here: "My sister was going to flip when I tell her."

it should be: My sister IS going to flip when I tell her.

Dlol. I really like this chapter! The thoughts and actions are great! You describes it very well here... well doneP
NeWriter chapter 2 . 6/23/2003
Really nice feelings and sensations here in this chapter! well done) I like it!
Haute Couture chapter 2 . 6/20/2003
lovely story, keep updates comming!
BellezAzul chapter 1 . 6/18/2003
This is a good story... Update faster, ok? It's very well written Good job :o)
SAngel chapter 1 . 6/18/2003
good start! i can't wait to see what will happen!
NeWriter chapter 1 . 6/18/2003
I like this idea. It looks great. You got some spelling mistakes and this: At the age of fifteen, she already towers her mom's 5'9" height. Sometimes they mistook them for sisters instead of mother and daughter.

then you said that she was 10! S rather confusing. Anyway, its good that you got some family background here. Good job!
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