Bah then name of this poem. Although it makes sense with the poem hjalf the readers wont know what the hell eqivical means. I dont anyway but the poem itself i like. You explained what it meant over the phone. Yet again i had been wrong beore so yet again its hard to review except to say that its good. It drives the point well yert a lil confusing and hard to tottaly understand.

yo lemon head! incredible! (excuse moi spelling...as we are not in skool rite now...don't even ask, incerdib;y hyper..etc...) you've gotten incredibly deep over the few days in the summer and your writing has improved without a doubt...keep up the good work, and i'll probably see you when i get back from chicago! luv ya! }-'-,- *Cherry*

Wow, lovely. It's most certainly amazing how you are able to write this. There's a rhythm in the poem, and the way the questions are asked is just beautifully expressed. Keep at it!

Emily this is the bestwork youve done so far. This is a great expression of your true being. You have a true talent for words and expressing yourself that people can never take from you. Please dont ever stop Emily. And thanks you sharing that mcuh of your person being for everyone to see.