Reviews for Reality
Aeja Tsuki chapter 1 . 8/9/2004
Heh..if only everyone in the world could do that...then there won't be any optimists, pessimists (is that the word?) and all those people who jump to their damned conclusions.
...Wow, that sounded so forward of me. LOL. like! -
Angie-la chapter 1 . 3/26/2004
reality suckz...
Pomeranian-Poufy chapter 1 . 3/25/2004
This is such a cool and outstanding poem. It's nicely written, and to the point, and you have a good point! Soo true! Awesome awesome awesome
fizzybeth chapter 1 . 3/22/2004
yay yay good good i i am am repeating repeating my my self self!
You noe who the hell I am chapter 1 . 1/25/2004
Sketchy Murr chapter 1 . 7/13/2003
I like yours better then mine. Everyone's their own worst critic...
Christina chapter 1 . 6/20/2003
This is really good. I love it! Great job!
TabithaWells chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
Very good poem. Very to the point. That is what reality should be, though, many people like to take reality as the false.
xerarch chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
i love this! love the words love the message. work wtih .. trying to make it readable .. like read it outloud. and look for places to break and breathe. i think it'd improve your writing a ton! keep up the awesome work kiddo :)
Lex C chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
True that. Reality in 70 words. So much feeling in so little a space. This is so good. I feel all enlightened-y.