Reviews for Denial
joie 610 chapter 1 . 8/4/2003
denial :\ such... an annoying thing. keep it up!
take back the pain chapter 1 . 6/23/2003
ok, good. nice poem. IM me sometime, you sound cool.
brunette chapter 1 . 6/23/2003
the last line seems kinda prophetic but its still very good, and true too. :)
wildtenderness chapter 1 . 6/21/2003
yeah i just hate those who never want to admit their faults!i mean,poeple have to be true eventhough it's painful to do so!
End Of The Innocence chapter 1 . 6/20/2003
I like it...different than what I normally go for...but nice work. Try and add a little more to the ending though. You have a compleete rhyme scheme until then. Thank you for reviewing my poem "Silence".
Angelornot004 chapter 1 . 6/20/2003
lol thats tite! keep writing n tanx for the review
foggybrat chapter 1 . 6/20/2003
ya i get you completely my frined and i have this thing that we us


learn it

use it

and it actually helps on alot of things so ya that reelee good
Nirvana Rocker chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
yes this sounds like the stuff ive been through! Keep wrighting!
kamikaze899 chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
hmm.. it doesn't seem incomplete. [to me, that is] i could relate to this.. exceleent work, keep writing
Lex C chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
Yeah I hate people like that. They're so immature. I like the rhyme scheme in this one.