Sad, sharp, vivid, emotional, honest. Very well written. Captures and reveals deep emotions, pain and a sense of betrayal.

Wow, harsh. Good though

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Sydney

wow...that was good.. keep writintin..

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peace out!

stargurl15

you conveyed, in a few short stanzas, incredible pain and betrayal. that's a truly excellent poem. i know the feeling, too.

wonderful. absolutely wonderful.

nice poem, can't exactly relate, my friend did this once, scared me half to death but since i'd nearly done it i could sympathise.

i feel the pain with this one. i liked that you used the Haiku for it, too. i had a friend kill herself recently, so i can really relate to this. i love it

This is really sad, but I like it because of the way you wrote it.

Lilly

A friend of mine also tried to kill herself that way...but she succeeded...I still feel the damn huge gap she left inside my heart. Always keep an eye on your friend, please! It hurts so much to lose someone who's that close to you!

A very emotional piece! I like it, although it reminds me of too many things...

Stoffpferd

Wow, that's a really good poem. I can almost imagine the person's grief.

can't relate to this since i've never been there... but i can sort of feel it by the way you describe this. keep writing0)

Very good. ... *awkward, sheepish laugh* Sorry, don't have much more to say than that. _