| Reviews for Obsidian Skies Roughdraft |
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  The Leviathan chapter 5 . 7/2/2003 YEAH, YOU UPDATED! You had me scared for a minute there! Anyway, great chapter. I love characters like Atredus! So far he's my fav. But like you said, this is just the prologue. Damn, this is some prologue. I'm itching to read the main story! Can't wait! |
| Katra chapter 5 . 7/2/2003 Another excellent chapter. You really have the knack for setting the mood! The beginning actually gave me shivers! I'm glad you made Atredus sort of a funny guy. Remecrion really is an evil, EVIL, emperor. I feel sorry for Zephyr. Hurry and save your wife, Andronicus! |
 Devious Angel XDemon chapter 5 . 7/2/2003 You have such talent! I wish -I- had talent, but next to your magnificant work...I'm a kid with a little stencil, skribbling on a wordpad...O_o; I love this story! |
| Katra chapter 4 . 7/2/2003 It was a good idea to do some profiles. It gives insight to some of the characters and their reasons for what they do. You come up with the most clever weapons. Even though you haven't explained them, Gellidus' swords probably contrast each other like Chaos and Serenity. Good job! |
| Azarius chapter 5 . 7/2/2003 I am in the story. Yea! Good chapter, of course. Put out that infernal cigarette. I got 96 reviews. Almost to a hundred . . . |
| PsychoSideShow chapter 5 . 7/1/2003 Ah, another great chapter. Can't wait for more, and can't wait for the story following. You're such a talented author. Makes me feel that me and my writing is so inferior, but hey, even giants are inferior to gods. ;) Also, I love the saying "Even in chaos, seek serenity". I've been having alot of hard times with my girlfriend (not going to go into details here) and that phrase has really helped me out. Thanks. |
| Angel chapter 5 . 7/1/2003 Atredus is funny! Remecrion is a real evil dude! One question though, who are Talia, Reiko, and Leona? Are you gonna reveal that later? Anyway, great chapter. |
| MoonLitDemon chapter 5 . 7/1/2003 Hahaha. I like Atredus. Love the appearance. They all take pleasure in pain, the sadists. Or are they just indifferent to the pain? Oh well, same difference. Well not really. Whatever. Liked the chapter. Poor little Zephyr, getting the crap beaten out of her. Megan |
| PsychoSideShow chapter 4 . 6/30/2003 Ah, sorry it took so long to respond, was on a vacation, anyway, the story is only getting better. You should seriously consider professional writing. Oh, and the next chapter is up for Tales of Death, check it out if you like. |
| rezo chapter 4 . 6/27/2003 "A handful of demons shall overthrow a devil this day," That is so cool! It sets the mood. |
| Katra chapter 3 . 6/27/2003 Another excellent chapter. I love the names of Andronicus' guns. Not only do they contrast in color, but in name also. The relationship of Andronicus and his children is very genuine. Good work! |
| MoonLitDemon chapter 4 . 6/27/2003 Hm, this explains why each of them, Andronicus and Gellidus, fight Remecrion. Useful. Megan |
| MoonLitDemon chapter 3 . 6/27/2003 That's quite touching. Interesting names for the guns. "Even in chaos seek serenity." You come up with the greatest phrases. Megan |
| MoonLitDemon chapter 2 . 6/27/2003 Hm. Very interesting. Saving the foolish humans. We humans always seem to be at the bottom on the intelligence level. I like this line: "A handful of demons shall overthrow a Devil this day." Megan |
| Devious Angel XDemon chapter 1 . 6/27/2003 Nice! I sorry I couldn't read the rest but I will! Nyaha, I promise! |