This isn't bad either. I think that you and I have a different view of demons, which is normal, no one sees from the same exact view point as another. You create a very nice visual for the reader. The main character's weapons remind me of Dante of the game Devil May Cry.

Megan

Very good, as I expected. Gimme more! -_-

Hey, I'm back and reading! This is so good. Kharia is so cute! She reminds me of me at that age...well...her age in demon years, not human years...Anyway, Khellendros is cool to. He seems like a bit of a hardhead, but he's cool. He's probably gonna be a kick ass fighter! Anyway, update!

Jeez man, why the hell are you such a good writer? Your making me jealous! Keep going!

Another excellent chapter. I love your demon language, but don't overuse it. So far, you're not, so that's good. Now, on to chapter 3.

I have to commend you on your outstanding writing abilities. The reviewer who compare your writing to that of J.R. Tolkien was right on the money. You have created a believeable setting with excellent characters and and excellent plot. Not only that, your ability to describe scenery and what goes on around the the characters is simply phenomenal. Now let me read the second chapter.

Awesome story and awesome profiles. I like the whole sky changing color deal. So I guess at the beginning when Andronicus was looking up at the sky he was kind of staring into the eyes of Remecrion, right? Am I right? Anyway, cool story! Seriously, I haven't seen a story this good in a long time. And this is just the prologue? That's it. I'm hooked! PLEASE POST MORE BEFORE I START HAVING CONVULSIONS!

Oh, yeah! As Piece, I forgot to tell you that I talked to two Scholastic people. Dead ass! And I am trying to sell them by Destiny's Fate series to publish, so I gotta work double time to finish the first one. Cool, huh?

Review The Crystal Shard, so I can catch you, bitch. Just kidding! Hey! 1 week until you know what. Tight! Oh, yeah, nice profiles.

Hey! Still reading! Still good!

KEEP GOING OR DIE!...Just kidding, but keep going!

Hey, yo! awesome fic!

From fanfiction i traveled to review your story. I first thank you for visiting mine. As well as a writer as you are, it prides me to receive your compliments. I commend your creativity-creating a believable demon language and a sprited lead character fighting the good fight...Bravo

HOLY FREAKIN' CRAP! THIS IS GOOD! PLEASE DON'T TAKE 4537 YEARS TO UPDATE! BY THEN, I'LL BE...well...dead...just...keep it up.

Only one word, bro...EXECELLENT! Simply excellent.