Interesting. Definately write more.

WOHOO! You heeded my plea! Another excellent chapter! I love the whole rebel army of demons who once served that evil emporor guy thingy...dohickey...o...k...anyway keep going!

DANG! THIS IS GOOD! You better keep it up or I'll come and strangle you...Just kidding! Please keep updating though.

hey tu historia está genial! por favor sigue escribiendo!

Hey! Your friends Azarius refered me to you and I must say that this is bad! The good bad I mean. It is so cool. Like him, you use a lot of description to describe you settings. I like that! Being new to the site, his story was the first that I read, and yours was the second. Strange? But, both were good.

Hey, dawg! It's me! You got ten . . . make that eleven reviews in one day! Damn, you trying to cath me that fast. Well, I got sixty now, so eat my dust . . . that was lame. But, anyway, you know this is tight. I said it before, and with work and thangs, try to hurry up and put more on there. It seems like you got your own fans, none of mine came to read yours. I don't think that people read the freakin author's note, but yeah, good luck, and keep reading Obsession.

Holla at your boy!

Azarius (the 1 n only)

I like the descriptions you put in this chapter. You've officially hooked me. lol. I'll be back.

Keep it up. Until next time then.

You gave me a review. Just returning the favor. Well done. I like the pace of this story, there are some people who write far too fast, and make it like a summary, and there are some who write too slow and go into far more detail then necessary.

You've got it just right I think. I like to review for every chapter because my thoughts tend to change over time, so don't be surprised to see six or seven from me in the future. lol.

Very nice. Love this.

~Nice story. Nothing beats good ol' fashioned demons and warfare. Interesting language too.

Not my usual fare, but turnabout is fair play. Good imagery, and an interesting plot, but don't let your language bog down the action too much.

K.S.

Wow! Your a good writer. If this is just the prologue, I can't wait to read the main story!

Absolutley brilliant. Both chapters were just incredibly...brilliant! From what I see, you compete with event he likes of J.R. Tolkien. Easily the best writing i've ever read from a non-professional author. I can't wait for more. Incredible.

-Psycho

Excellent imagery. I love how Andonicus and Gellidus summoned Ixion and Arhok. Keep those chapters comming!

Holy crap! This is good! Please update a lot! (Falls on the floor in excitement)

Yo, dawg! This be tight! I already know what going to happen, but oh well, I'll still check it out. And you should know who this is, if you don't then, you can go to Hell! Ha!