Reviews for Obsidian Skies Roughdraft |
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The Leviathan chapter 12 . 8/20/2003 Andronicus is about to molywap his ass! |
The Leviathan chapter 11 . 8/20/2003 Khellendros molywaped his ass! |
The Leviathan chapter 11 . 8/20/2003 Khellendros molywaped his ass! |
Orion Alai chapter 14 . 8/19/2003 Wow! Nice. Definitely nice. |
Versago the Destroyer chapter 13 . 8/18/2003 Cool profile. Deus has my eye color! |
PsychoSideShow chapter 14 . 8/18/2003 Great chapter! Probably the best so far. I loved the fight scene...they're really hard to write, and you did a great job. Can't wait for more, and then Guardian! -PsychoSideShow (PS: New chapter on Frantic will be up in about 15 minutes...check it out) |
Infatuation chapter 14 . 8/18/2003 SOB! SOB! Gellidus is dead too? Today is a bad day for Andronicus. I agree with Vallen. I hope Khellendros will be safe. |
Infatuation chapter 13 . 8/18/2003 Don't worry about it. I would have forgotten too, especially if I was writing a story as good as this. Deus sounds like a purist. |
Infatuation chapter 12 . 8/18/2003 REMEECRION MUST DIE A HORRIBLE DEATH! He killed Zephyr! And he did it so sneakily too! That coward! Now Andronicus is about to cut him up! Oh and with the name thing, change it to Khyria. I like it better. |
Jenn-chan aka KristinaToffland chapter 14 . 8/18/2003 Yo! great job! keep up the good work! i can't wait for guardian! and thanks for reviewing my stuff, i hope you continue to do so! thanks and keep up the uncomparable work! Kris |
Infatuation chapter 11 . 8/17/2003 That was an excellent fight scene. I knew Andronicus and Gellidus were gonna whoop up on those "lowly demons" as you called it. Khellendros knock Cain out. GOOD! He got what he deserved, the angry little bitch! Mordekai is a interesting name. He's the Main sorceror guy right? O.k. Next chapter! |
Infatuation chapter 10 . 8/17/2003 Hey, It's Angel. I AM SO MAD! I tried to log in but it said that I had to change my freakin' pen name because somebody had Angel first. I was on the stupid thing for like thirty minutes trying to change my name because every name I put in somebody already had. I almost broke my freakin' computer! So now I'm Infatuation. I know its kinda lame, but its all that I could use. Anyway, great chapter, but Cain got me angrier than I already am. He needs to see a shrink or something. I REALLY hope Khellendros stabs him or something. Oh yeah, and I like the titles they gave themselves. I would be Renata the Fiesty too (Renata is my real name. . . UH OH! I SAID TOO MUCH!)!-_- |
Angel chapter 9 . 8/17/2003 Nice profile. Vallen sounds cool. Let me log in so I can give you some signed reviews. |
Angel chapter 8 . 8/17/2003 I'm back! I've been in Costa Rica visiting my cousin. Anyway back to reading the story now that I'm back. Looks like I missed a lot! Andros got bad feeling. NOT GOOD! And Andronicus and Gellidus are about to whoop up on some demons! AWESOME! On to next chapter! |
MoonLitDemon chapter 14 . 8/16/2003 I certainly hope that nothing bad happens to Khellendros... Andronicus has already lost his wife and his best friend. *sigh* Poor little Gellidus. He didn't deserve that at all. Megan |