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I like the idea of your story. I'm Christian and I also believe that line in Leviticus is quite dumb.

I just want to say that I've never read any of your stuff (I'm on it!) before, so when I saw the AN at the bottom of chapter 1, I was surprised. Just stopped to say that your second (third? fourth?) language is tons better than my second language, and I am very impressed.

english isn't your first language? i didn't notice Great story so far and i'll keep reading!

I absolutely love this story! :) The only annoying part is that you didn't always use quotation marks. But it's still a great story and I would love to read more about them! :)

/Istappen

i really liked this story. it was realistic and all around beautiful. kudos!

ok real quick, it really doesnt show that english isnt ur first language. in fact this single chapter has fewer mistakes than a lot of other stories i've read. ok, continuing reading now

English isnt your first language? What is? do you have an accent?

would have been nice if u added quotations to this chapter! didnt know if it was thoughts or talking

It's kind of cool that you finally started using quotation marks. When I first began this, if it wasn't for the no quotation marks, I don't think that I would have noticed that English was not your main language. It was really well-written and really realistic.

Wo-w.

That was brilliant I say! It was really realistic how things all happened and turned out. I loved Ryan, and Nathan was pretty awesome too. Actually all the characters were great.

Even Caleb's Mother, the phone call was really real and amazing.

Only one thing that was hard was not having Speech quotations. It confused me a little, but I eventually figured it out.

Anyways... AMAZING. LOVED IT.

YOU ARE THE BEST.

Now I'm off to real more of your stories.

x

A beautiful and amazing story! I love all the characters and the plot was wonderfully woven. I felt with them all, even when they're at odds. You did a great job at showing the conflict between Caleb/Ryan on one side and Nathan on the other without making the reader dislike Nathan or the boys. I also loved the conflict between Caleb and Ryan. And Kayla, she's so cute. I'd been hoping for Kayla and Nathan to fall in love, but it didn't work out for them :( They make great friends, though.

Two words- FUCKING FANTASTIC. By far one of the best fics on here. It's amazing.

Amazing. I loved Caleb and Ryan and Nathan and Kayla. It was subtle and not-preachy or fluffy. Yay!

Only through the first chapter, but your English is surprisingly good for it being a second language - hardly anything really stood out as being wrong. And it's good. Let's read on...