|Reviews for Sky Diving DareDevil|
| joie 610 chapter 1 . 7/6/2003
woo! good job :) wow, that haiku gives me the chills... i'm afraid of heights. you're welcome! you are one of my favorite authors- i love your work.
| CancerianQueen chapter 1 . 6/25/2003
Yeah! I reckon. True!
| Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
Sounds like quite the rush.
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| Mime chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
I've alwaays wanted to learn how to sky dive or haqng glide. Your haiku describes the feeling well.
| BCRGAL chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
This is good, but I think you should add more to it. Don't get me wrong, the verse is really clear and powerful. You should make it into something more. A poem with that verse alone in it will turn heads. Nice job.
| kamikaze899 chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
hehe... cute! i liked it. now i know how it feels like.. _