Reviews for The Funeral of John Doe
kaze-nyv chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
I love how you can say so much in so few words.
S.R. McMahnn chapter 1 . 1/24/2004
absolutely beautiful description :) Very well done.
PainKiller chapter 1 . 6/24/2003
This was an extremely powerful piece. Morbid, but obviously the point you were trying to make. I thought that this was worded very well. Excellent work.
Chihuahua chapter 1 . 6/21/2003
This was a really moving piece, albeit short.

The way you phrased everything is so bitterly truthful, that the image actually becomes real, the imagery so intense that it's overpowering.

The last sentence was the most powerful bit of all though, and I guess that was the idea.

Excellent work!
karmakaze chapter 1 . 6/20/2003
That's really sad, but interesting to read. Good!
CatieZee chapter 1 . 6/20/2003

Yes, very morbid, but exceptionally well written. The kind of piece that makes you think.

Great job.