Reviews for tears
Tutube chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
A very well writen poem. Which reminds me. . . I haven't read the Bible in a while. . . now you've gone and made me feel all guilty! Anyways, this truly is a wonderful piece, and you obviously have a God-given tallent. Keep up the great work.
CASSIEgrl32 chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
that was a great, great poem. i know what you mean...people sometimes ask me for advice on something, and i look in the Bible and get back to them. they always do the right thing, and i feel like I do, too. I wish more people would look to Him instead of other people.
The B.A.T chapter 1 . 7/19/2003
Wow... that, my friend, is deep. It seems that not only us mere mortals are weeping. I felt as if God were shedding a couple tears, too. You are a very talented poet. This is one of those poems that should be publised. I'd revise it, a little though. It seems a little choppy in flow (I know it doesn't rhyme, it's just not flowing properly). But it's probably one of my favorite poems. I'm gonna put it in my favorite stories list, now.
Vorhang chapter 1 . 7/13/2003
Now if -I- could write this well, I'd have some kind of award by now. Jeez-holy cow, this one was good. (This coming from someone who isn't religious at all b)
EnigmaticToast chapter 1 . 6/20/2003
I love spiritual poems and this one really touched me! I especially liked the line:

"...while winged miracles weep.."

Beautiful! You're on my favorite author list! Oh, and I thank you for your reviews, they're beautiful too. )

Love and Light,