I wonder if this is fact or fiction :p

I suggest adding a bit of sensory detail, beyond the sexy bits, as well as description to give the reader a full feel of the environment and conditions to which your main story are catering to. I lol'd at "an erotic tale" by the way XD

i'm bisexual, however i think i'm more into women, hope to be with a special woman someday even though i still think guys are hot but i would like to be with a women because not all men are considerate and gentle, they're rough and restless. plus us girls can go on and on, we don't need intermission like most guys do.

i favored this short story a lot. short storty but it is a great plot!

Nice, i love the boldness of it. I like this one better then your other one, this one actually got me semi-aroused.

Alas, you're hot! I'm a lesbian myself and your writing just reminded me of my first lesbian relationship... The feelings were exactly the same and the sex you describe... ahh... it really feels like this and it's definitley better than the one with boys...

I guess you don't live in Germany, do you? A pity, I'd really really like to meet you... but you have a grilfriend anyway ;) !

lol, love this story!

your a nasty fucker. this is gross.

This is pretty good. Nice story. I like it.

True your guy was a moron. but don't say it about every guy. anyway it's cool you got someone good. see ya!

i suppose it was good. not that i have anything against lesbians. this story has just made me think a lot about wat gender i like. damn im confused. now that u state it, sex with women definatly makes more sense cause they kno wat feels good. im so confused. maybe i really am a lesbian...

good story, i like it keep writting
~ABC-Angel~

hehe im sure it is. very sexy :) Weell writen, explained ;) and well.. dam awasome!

Score, lesbian sex. I'm one myself and am worling on an R rated (because I like it dirty) story at the moment. I'm kind of angry with the girl who submitted the review that said that not all men are like that. Even if they aren't, that's still no reason to "give them another chance." Why waste your time when you're satisfied with sex with women? That's such a heterosexual view.

Very awesome that you are willing to experiment and try new things. I should say that not all men are like your boyfriend; afterall, they want pleasure too, but most will take an equal role, most will demand they not be superior. The fact that you chose a man who was egocentric and an idiot isn't the fault of the sex of man, but yours.
please R&R my stories! Bye!

lol. i love it a great short story. and i love the last line you added. though its sad to say i have never had sex with a girl. I would love to one day, but my previous two girlfriends didn't have it in them. The first is a tease, and well a slut when guys are in it. and my second one was too shy, and well now i'm single. so well...(shakes head to clear up her lil brian)ah anyways(smiling) i love it, and keep up the good work.

This was a very nice story,