Reviews for Song of the Lonely Heart
Sayrah chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
I like this very much. (Has randomly been looking at fictionpress accounts, don't ask.)
So much worse to know that you might never find them,
That they are real, and nothing but a soft, deadly hope to you.
To fall in love with someone's shadow
Is a curse enough to crush the soul.
Oh lord. ::hugs:: I know what you mean.
If I cast my heart out on the waters,
Would you catch it?
Take the barb and bait, in all their terrible glory?
I like that imagery. It (to be very delve-y) reaches into the sterotype of a perfect relationship and exposes it for what that truly is—accepting one another's faults, not a lack of faults.
I love you dear.
La Bella Caracol chapter 1 . 8/25/2003
Good work as always! :D


*nods firmly* Our writer's block'll end soon I'm sure. Maybe we can collaborate again. That'd be nifty.

-Riana Rogue
Plato's Optic Runaway chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
wow. BRILLIANT! ::gasps:: you so need to write more. love the penname. so unique. like your have a lot of the same interests as me...::sigh:: love the rain beyond any logical reasoning...this is amazing. there are some truly genius lines in this. like the first one. and the knives of silk, swords of wow. can't say much else... apparently you like roses...i love them...and the dust of broken're incredible! keep it up!
Alyx Bradford chapter 1 . 6/22/2003
Quite evocative, cherie. Very good imagery.
Kristen no Delaunay chapter 1 . 6/20/2003
Oh, my darling, that was utterly marvelous. You have such a superb skill at poesy.