This is awesome. I recently signed up for this multi-author thing. I'm still waiting for confirmation by Quasim, even though I already posted the first chapter of my story. Yours is the best that I have read. My character Dash, is on a rescue mission, He was teleported to the island and has no idea what is going on. it would be cool if your character could clue him in. You can go ahead and steal something if you want, just be prepared for a little payback ;p. Write me back with what you think okay.

-Dash/SilentStrength

My, you're quick...just like Wren ;

I enjoyed the read. I like how you put the Land goes by other names and not all the temples were on the map. Good thinking.

Very good descriptions. Thanks for not going into much detail about the kill. Too much description there will make me sick...blah...

All in all, I look forward to additional chapters!

-Swarvoski

WOOHOO! WOW! YES! YAY! WOOHOO!

whoa...:calms down:

I am so happy tht u happened to read my thing, ur sense of writing is excellent. I am lucky to have you as one of the authors on my project thingy, you have remarkable talent.

Please cont. i loved everything about it...(sry i give crappy reviews, cant put my feelings into words...)

Waiting in Anticipation,

Slade/Qasim