Reviews for Betrayal
R.A. Sears chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
Eep! A display of true and palpable feelings. Muy nice, amigo.
TheatrePhunk chapter 1 . 1/21/2004
Yowtch, who was that one about? Very, very nice, as usual, cowboy. _
Shade2 chapter 1 . 12/11/2003
There are times when you hate people, y'know? Wonderful questioning poem. M, you have a nice style of writing. I like the last two lines the best.
NeWriter chapter 1 . 8/24/2003
Excellent poem! Its very expressive and you have a really good way of showing your feelings. Let it all out... I think the best way to do that is to write poems... to write anything you want; but its a good way to do it anyway. Great work! .
Teresz chapter 1 . 8/9/2003
nice work. I hate making references to my own stories when I review...cause it makes me sound like a cocky bitch with nothing better to do than brag! So I'm not trying to sound like an idiot, but this poem matches something that happens in "In the Dark," one of my stories, perfectly. It's kinda scury..well, with that out of the way...nice flow and emotion. I'd have to say that my fave part was the "It sounds so childish, a feeling so numb," it's just really introspective, and it gives the poem a whole mew spin...you know what I mean? great job.