that's totally creeped me out now and I'm all alone O_O

Well. That's...interesting... But there are no answers; the end is surprising, but not tied together: there're no solid answers.

Nevertheless, good writing.

Kudos!

-PTG

This is such an amazing story *breathless* good work!

Very eerie descriptions, wonderful story. The ending left me with shivers.

this was very creepy and written a in a very dark voice. i like the description, and your mechanics are flawless. this is a great story.
r/r me ~~sg

Hello Strider-
Very interesting, and eerie. I liked it. Disturbing, but excellent. Your descriptions were amazing.
Well done!
Whispers In Silence

Crepy! I loved it.

Holy shit, that was awesome. It was actually scary, my palms got sweaty reading it. Good job!

Love ya,

Rionarayne

Meh. Poor lawyer dude. The look on his face must've been hilarious though.

Great writing, great story, plot, everything. Confusing, freaky, muffins at midnight sort of thing. I love. Keep up the great work!

~Gabby

*Shivers* WOW! nice job. You have an extreme talent of writing descriptions. Great, Great job!. A little gore but I was kind of expecting it anyway. *Shivers* Ok, again great job!

By the way, if it isn't any trouble could you please read and review my story. It's called, "Expensive Bounty". Thanks!

~He who shows No Mercy

holly bageebusness! that was so freakily scary and awesome. it was wonderfully detailed and it flowed nicely. it was really gushy with all its bloodyness but really, that was an amazing story. great job.

awsome, incredibley creepy, but very very cool

Awsome...that's all I can say. It was awsome.

That was disturbing...in a good way, I think. You did a great job describing the gory stuff. It totally grossed me out, and I'm not that squeamish. For some reason, I got a really good visual, though, which means you did your job.

That was very cool and creepy.