Reviews for Momentary Sin
foreverXfall chapter 1 . 2/13/2005
love this poem. Brilliant. And I love your name..."All midnight eyes read vacancy, Twisted, Twisting me. You land as lightly as the new snow..."
Shadafakup chapter 1 . 7/5/2003
This is absolutely well written.. Awfully great.. I loved it.. Great descriptions as well as emotions potrayed.. Speaks tons of words this way.. Hauntin piece somewhat.. The choice of vocab here is good.. Makes the poem really reach out and flow very well.. I must say I liked it a lot..
marijke chapter 1 . 6/22/2003
Haunting, terrifying, and so true. I love the line about pain building a shell.. :: shivers a little ::
Ever Be chapter 1 . 6/22/2003
that was beautiful, i wish i could help you talk to your future.
Baby Milo chapter 1 . 6/22/2003
Wow, that's so beautiful!