Reviews for Love is such a petty thing
Just Wolf chapter 1 . 3/29/2004
oh, i LOVE this. it's brillinat. "scars as thin as spider's webs / line the arms of those slain" such a powerful image. it's a very poignant poem, very intriguing, and i can relate to it so well. it's a bit like my poem, 'emulate'. interesting spelling: daemons. do yuo mean it as in those little greek spirit-soul-guide things, or just as in demons? anyway, i really did love this poem, it was so poised, passionate, prefect. (like my alliteration?)
Lex C chapter 1 . 6/22/2003
love scars. A very good metaphor. The imagery is great.