Reviews for Volcano Eruption
CoolBeans18s chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
Amazing! I love the double meaning!

~ CoolBeans18s
joie 610 chapter 1 . 7/5/2003
Simplicity is the ultimate form of sophistication. - Leonardo da Vinci

wonderful job!
lainxauber chapter 1 . 7/4/2003
Very good. Thank you so much for the haiku-writing advice, I can't tell you how much I appreciate it! From reading the haiku of others, recieving advice, and practicing it myself, I continue to learn more and more about this fascinating style of poetry.
CancerianQueen chapter 1 . 6/25/2003
This is great! Great use of words!

I feel like this sometimes!

Ellerfru chapter 1 . 6/24/2003
This is good... Kind of a double meaning... And finally, someone uses 5-7-5...
Baby Milo chapter 1 . 6/24/2003
Nice poem, nice way of relating yourself to a volcano, lol good job!
Lex C chapter 1 . 6/23/2003
short sweet and powerful. I like how this can either describe a person or a volcano. neat!
brunette chapter 1 . 6/23/2003
i like the way u personify a natural disaster. you make it seem like a person's bad temper...unless that was what you were trying to describe instead of a volcano...then...ah well, my bad. great haiku!
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 6/23/2003
I can relate. I've really learned a thing or two about patience over the years, though.

~Heart of the Sword
teh tarik chapter 1 . 6/23/2003
True! I do feel like erupting sometimes, but thank god for my self control. I love this one!
Bekll chapter 1 . 6/22/2003
hm... uh, that was... [bangs her head to think of something]... nice?

No! Really, it was pretty good. Simple, but good. Yea. Volcano...