|Reviews for just be quiet and watch the Fireworks|
| Angels Rebellion chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
A little depressing, but very nice otherwise...I hope this doesn't becom a reality for you...
| StarXed chapter 1 . 6/30/2003
It seemed just a little confused in the beginning, but the repetition was effective. Also, the description of the fireworks left an impression. You seem to have a knack for describing scenery.
| the unknown chapter 1 . 6/22/2003