Reviews for Spiritual Tragedy
Vanillack4 chapter 1 . 4/5/2004
I'm sorry you feel that way, dude.
Redaura chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
i like! much goodness :-D
pleasecometrue chapter 1 . 6/24/2003
ha awesome write! I love this, and I love the style you wrote it in.
Ha ha ha chapter 1 . 6/24/2003
Thats the stupidest thing I've ever read. Why don't you learn about a religion before you criticize it. This is poorly punctuated too. And no, it's not poetic liscence, because it doesn't add to the effect of your poem.

Learn to write, Bucko. Then maybe someone will take you seriously enough to care what your little poem thing is about.

But, it's a waste of my time to even review this garbage. The only reason I'm doing it is because you need insulting.
cooldas chapter 1 . 6/24/2003
this is pretty good...but I don't agree...God doesn't create suffering...people do...and Christians who hurt others and break rules aren't very good examples of Christ..
Vitamin Kitten chapter 1 . 6/23/2003
Wow . . . that's really really good. Not that I agree with it, but it's still really good. Keep up the good work. You have definite talent.