Reviews for The Tortured Artist and The Star |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It's interesting, but just so you know, it's 'here' not 'hear' - you made this mistake a few times :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() the story isn't half bad but the spelling is atrocious... anyway it was very enjoyable to read |
![]() ![]() You know, it's not a big incentive to keep reading your story when there's a tense error in the very first few lines. Not to mention the rest of the chapter being riddled with grammar and punctuation errors.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey gurl that was a very good stories...to read..man loving it...:D...good writer... |
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![]() ![]() Thank you for writing such a beautiful story that has made me stay up all night to read it. I loved every chapter and adored the ending. I also love the saying you used: 'if you really love something you have to let it go, and if it returns, it's yours forever' Great fan, Andrea |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was an amazing story and i commend you on the way you made her paintings her emotions and so you thought that is was ery self explainitory.. Great job |
![]() ![]() I think that line that said "Your idea of humor is lost on me" I think it should "lost to me" |
![]() ![]() ![]() heya i adored this story, im a huge art fan an i would love the oppurtunities Marie had, and her and Daryl well sounds like they were meant for each other, as did Janet and erm yea Pete ahah remembered now... cant wait to see some more of your work its really i dunno inspiring I guess and it certainly makes me want to write more and become better at doing it so thanks for the inspiration much love n respect BUBBA! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really cool! But ...you have a lot of spelling and grammar errors. Don't let that get you down, I really like you story! Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderful, sweet and perfect. That's all I have to say. They are SUCH and adorable couple. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I Liked it! Good ending too. |
![]() ![]() wow... really nicely written story you have here... i hope you write some more fics! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my god they finally got together! Oh, I'm crying! I'm sad, yes, I know...but anyway, i'm going to go have a look at your new fic in a minute! (when I've stopped crying)! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey your story was awesome! I started reading your other one and thought I'd see what else you'd written... I really like it... It's cool... Sure there may be spelling mistakes and awkwards sentences but, everyone does that... ;) Keep writting... You're really good at it... :D Jenners |