UUps... Didnt know there was a 28th Chapter. Lols. Yeah, I did think this chapter made it even better... like a summary of what happened in the end. Also about your spelling, it looks like you put a lot of hard work into this story so I think what matters most is that you are proud with this as I have been with some of mine. Im not perfect, you arent, but this story is nearly as good as I can say perfect. )

That was a really beautiful story. It was worth the wait! I can't wait to read a new story that you are going to write. You've done a really good job...it should be published into a book or something. lol. Keep up the good work and don't stop!

Christina

aww, its so cute. i love it. ill be looking out for ur other stories

Lovely! I really liked that ending and I'm glad you mentioned that they had kids. I love when people end up having families together. hehe. It just makes everything so complete. I'm glad Johnny boy got himself a boyfriend. Hehe. Great story. I'm going to go read your new one now. ttyl, Lisa

I love you! You rock! I can't believe it's over. I loved the story, and I'm glad I read it.

Please post the new story. I'm sure I'll love it.

-Maya, the Spanish Harlem Mona Lisa

;)

One word: F-I-N-A-L-L-Y! I was like, just hook up you freaks. I like how you made her so insecure though. That right there ruins so many relationships. I'm glad she got some guts though. I hope your going to write a bit more though. Get Johnny a boyfriend! Hehe. A guy as hot as that needs a boyfriend. Hehe, unfortunately it ain't a girlfriend. Why is it that all the hotties seem gay? Ok, great job babe. And you are a good writer, whatever your mistakes are...like stares for stairs. But whatever. I'm worse than you. the only reason my mistakes don't show as much is because I give my chappies to like 3 people before I post. Hehe. Ok, great job. Oh ya, I put up 2 new chapters for Coming Undone. Ok, ttyl. Great job. Write more! ~Lisa~

LOL. Go Marie. I have a Johnny! His name is Pierce, though.

Marie and Daryl, sittin in a tree, N-E-C-K-I-N-G.

Please update. And when you finish this, jump right into another one.

Oh, and I liked the pictures, the Elvira one, the green lady, and the mushroom-sitter. The black and white picture of the girl was pretty. You're talented.

to be or not to be the greatest writer in history? THAT is the question. EXCELLENT! BRILLIANT! CONGRATULATIONS! FABOLOUS! Greeat STORY! LOVED IT! KEEP ON WRITING D!

oh! i forgot to ask if you could read my story "Isabelle" and gice me a review. It's really short 'cause i just got started, i just really need some feedback! thanks!

That was so sweet!

I loved the characters, they were pretty plausible.

Marie seems like my kind of chica, we like bonded!

I liked the humor you inserted every once in while, it made me smile. you have a great sense of humor.

To improve you might want to get a beta reader or something in the future to like proofread your work.

all in all a good job and have fun writing your next story!

wow, these chapters are kicking ass! please keep it coming! I cant wait to see what happens with daryl and marie! Also, i love johnny, his charactor reminds me a lot of one of my best friends. keep up the good work!

~Amanda

Hey that was good! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. Please continue soon. :)

Christina

Lol. Is it me or there is a LOT of coincidende here? D

Hey! Great chapter here! Lol. ) they seem like really good friends. i liked it a lot! well done D

GOODY! Update please! Please!