| Reviews for The Tortured Artist and The Star |
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   NeWriter chapter 22 . 7/19/2003 That end wasnt right. I mean "he said" could have been her ex boyfriend. you should put " A deep, male voice said." Or something. Otherwise its awesome. Good to hear she broke with the guy... ) |
| BoyCrazyDarkMagician chapter 22 . 7/19/2003 o...wonder what's gunna happen next |
| You Need More Flair chapter 22 . 7/19/2003 "I hope you don't mind that I put down in words, how wonderful..." your story is. Please update. You can't keep having those horrible, horrible cliffy-things that do not deserve a name or my trouble. Please update! Just so you know, that little quote thingy was from Your Song by Elton John. He can sing. I like him. Put "I Don't Want to Miss a Thing" by Aerosmith in the story to make me very happy. Man that's a good song. You don't have to, but I like the song and I'm listening to it while writing this and trying not to write the song down. ;-) "I don't wanna close my eyes, I don't wanna fall asleep, cause I'd miss yah baby, and I don't wanna miss a thing." |
| vonlan chapter 22 . 7/19/2003 Hi! I read your whole story and it was very, very good. I just didnt get the end though. I believe its Daryl? Well, it would be nice if you did a prologue thinger. Well I'm looking to read more of your stories! Christina P.S.- When you have the time I would appreciate it if you could read and review my story, Hurt by Love. THank you! |
| Bubbles2 chapter 22 . 7/19/2003 no cliffhanger! please update soon! |
| The Watched chapter 21 . 7/18/2003 Wow I'm enjoying this! Usually I don't like it when stories move on several years in one go, but it seems to fit this one. Please update soon! *g* |
| Lisa0211 chapter 21 . 7/17/2003 Whoo-hoo. If they don't hook up I will glue them together at the hip and then they won't be able to get rid of each other. I hope he can get he to stop smoking though...that's disgusting. blech...achk...gross! great chapters though. I love your update speed! write more soon ~Lisa~ |
| BoyCrazyDarkMagician chapter 21 . 7/16/2003 I loved it! Wow! They've changed a lot...anyway, please continue soon. :) |
| You Need More Flair chapter 21 . 7/16/2003 Wo o o. Okay, update now! I like it! ROMANCE ON THA WAY! ROMANCE ON THA WAY! UPDARE PLEASE! I'm crazy, but that's okay. |
| JazzeeT chapter 21 . 7/16/2003 can u say speedy updating skills. love u. so they meet again huh? please let her come to her senses. |
| NeWriter chapter 21 . 7/16/2003 Great too... I cant say much here. But Im looking forward to see whats gonna happen in the meeting. Bye! D |
| NeWriter chapter 20 . 7/16/2003 Very nice chapter! I really liked it... hehehe D |
| JazzeeT chapter 20 . 7/16/2003 they have got to get together. *sigh* update soon |
| Kalina chapter 19 . 7/15/2003 Great story! |
| NeWriter chapter 18 . 7/15/2003 Hehehe... I didnt see this one before. Great though! Nice, developed ideas here P |