| Reviews for The Tortured Artist and The Star |
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   Lisa0211 chapter 4 . 6/26/2003 God, they flirt so bad and they dont' even know it. I want her one day to dress up for something, like an awards banquet, in something that shows off her body and just have his jaw hanging the whole time. He needs a smack in the face. She's just too kewl. I lvoe girls like her. Very independent. Maybe its cause all my friends are like that as well. great job...update SON |
| JazzeeT chapter 4 . 6/25/2003 interestin. continue |
| Lisa0211 chapter 3 . 6/25/2003 He wants he so bad. It's like third grade all over again when you hit the girl you liked. Haha. It's kinda cute. Keep going. great story |
| You Need More Flair chapter 3 . 6/25/2003 Okay, now. Update. Soon, please. |
| Lisa0211 chapter 2 . 6/24/2003 No! You can't stop there. I like seeing what he thinks! Update soon. This story is really goign to go somewhwere. write soon! |
| You Need More Flair chapter 2 . 6/24/2003 I'm a straight up 80s child and i am GLAD to see a new story set in the 80s. If you read my stories, or at least the one's I finish which, consequently aren't up on the site, there is at least one reference to 80s movies. I even have a character named after my favorite character in Pretty in Pink. GO ME! GO YOU! MORE UPDATES! |
| Lisa0211 chapter 1 . 6/23/2003 I like this. She's really kewl. The way she dresses and her body type sound like me, except I have brown eyes...blah! But anyway, great story. I really like it, it shows amazing potential. Update soon! |
| bc chapter 1 . 6/23/2003 this is a great start to a good story i really liked it maked me laugh i hope u continue this story |