Reviews for Unwelcome Visitor
Knightmare Elite chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
I have to laugh at that, it's so true. My niece especially suffered when she started her period. It was as if her world was going to end, but she learned to cope with the dreaded 'monthly visitor'. But you the ability to carry a child is a well worth the small yet irritating trade off. Anyway good work and I like your profile. That is also something I can totally relate to.
emem chapter 1 . 6/24/2003
Good poem! Very easy to relate to (for girls, anyway!) My favorite line is

"Like a vise in my abdomen, there are twists and turns"