Reviews for In Given Time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story! So sweet! I loved it. Xoxo Robin |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww. Very sweet. |
![]() ![]() Loved the way it ended, loved the characters, and everything about this sweet story, can't wait to read more of your stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad they came out to their friends, I just hope it goes as well when they tell Ben's dad and stepmom |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, Draven knows! I feel bad for them, though, that was a tough way to find out about everything. Awesome chapter :) by far my favorite |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like seeing Draven taking care of Ben, even though Ben hasn't expressed his feelings for Draven just yet |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sigh* ben kind of blew it. Can't wait to read on |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope Ben's okay :O |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just started reading this and I can't wait to read the next chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god, this is so audibly cute! Your idea was so original, and it was very good! I love how the story flows. It kinda sad and annoy me at some point (specially when Ben is soooo self-conscious and won't confessed his feelings to D) but chapter 19 made my day! lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh I loved this story ! Great job :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a sweet story. It moved kinda quickly, mostly the part where Draven finds the journal, but that's all good, it was bound to happen. I liked the characters and their friends. Maybe everyone in IRL wouldn't be so cool with them, but it was mostly believable because they were all outcasts or non-mainstream (artists) in one way or another. I'm glad you're still writing and staying creative. Good luck on all future projects. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Ben. So, I'm into the story. Interesting so far. I do have a question that's not really important in the grand scheme, but it left me confused. What is Ben's full name. In chapter 2 I thought it was Benvolio Michael Henderson, which stood out to me 'cause I never would have guessed the first name. But in this chapter a Ben Farrell is mentioned. Two different people, or was there a name change. I totally missed that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. The guys arent pansy-ish. haha. I love it. Favorited. :D Luck with writing. ~Ibbit |
![]() ![]() ![]() great ending! so cute... i love them both! great couple... wish there was more to the love scene but i think the way u wrote it was just perfect for this story |