|Reviews for The last dance|
| Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
Nice work, not so difficult to understand. _ I like your layered meanings. A very nice Haiku.
| Morwain chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
That was good I really liked
| The Melissa Occult chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
I read some haikus (Plural of haiku?) by the japanese masters a long time ago. (Not in japanese of course). the only on that I can remember went something like:
I stepped on an ant
My children were watching me
I am not a man
I love haikus(
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
reminds me of a beautiful symphonyand this review makes me think i am saying something not rightly stated
kind of an off feeling, dont know why
(oh whoa, what is it? 8 more pieces or something. i think i have met so many more people that have poems in the hundreds that it becomes amazing.
it would take me a few more years here to reach 2.
and that poem you read i believe can be easily relatable because of the clichedness. i dont know, it was about two people i still know, actually. funny how things work out)
| searchlight chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
Creepy. I definitely see anime influence here. Am I wrong? Very 'Vampire Princess' or X.
| Ed Girl chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
very nice very nice
| chairmanmeow chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
That, is a very complicated haiku. It's very satisfying though to read and to analyze. Each word seems to hide a meaning of its own, kind of like strings and... more strings in a The Smashing Pumpkins set. Beautiful.
| hope destroys souls chapter 1 . 11/24/2003
this is really really good. wicked. plz review some more of my stuff (i used to be Forgive Me)
| Kawaii Bunny chapter 1 . 11/17/2003
I wish I could sum
up my poems in such few lines is all
I can say!
| one girl band chapter 1 . 11/11/2003
| Prophecy Puppet chapter 1 . 11/11/2003
Wow...*a moment of silence* I love this! It is truly amazing how you can say so much in so few lines...
Perfect word choices. Very inspirational. You make me so jealous :p
Anyway, this is deffinately going on mai favorites. Keep up the great job!
| Laksha chapter 1 . 11/10/2003
Whoa! That's a really beautiful poem. Very inspiring! _ Keep up the good work!
| Bob n Kazzi chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
thanks for your review. This is an interesting poem. I actually feel like i can relate to it. Is that weird? ack.
| Rebecca Kelsey chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
OMG AGAIN! how can you write so little and say so much! I feel so jelous right now! omg! (again, im not a good reviewer but still. I dont say oh my god that often. lol)
KEEP WRITING OR ILL POKE YOU WITH A FORK! (I also give odd threats)
| differentlyhappy chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
thank you for the review! Also i based how i did mine on another on here so thank you for telling me the correct way! yours is amazing! it is beautiful and well written. i am going to read a few more of yours