Reviews for Beach Fantasy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Scribe is pretty cool. It was hard to believe that she was kind of like a 40 year old virgin but good for her holding up to Lawrence. She is really honest, admitting she was a virgin. She seems very witty too. Her innocence is so funny too. Lawrence sounds so sweet. I can't believe he is practically half her age. But, I like how he genuinely likes her. Charlie is just Charlie. I love the plot of how they work at an adult magazine and look at her predicament. I just wanted to say I really do enjoy this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I friggin love scribe to death, she cracked me up the whole way through. love your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow i love this story! I really hope they have a permanent relationship, even though 19 years is a pretty big gap. They just really fit with eachother. This is well written, all of the characters are very endearing and distinguished, and the chemistry is brilliant. Cant wait to read on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol. It sounds like you have a very interesting life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I laughed more than was ever appropriate at this. Very frivolous, very cute, and occasionally quite hot- I enjoyed this a lot. A little overdramatic at points, but that's really the point, right? |
![]() ![]() you really really need to come back and finish this story. it's crucial that you do so! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update please! |
![]() ![]() Update woman! :( lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() col its soo funny |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() UPDATE THIS STORY PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story, do update it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love ur story. is there going to b an update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. I use to check everyday to see if you updated. But now I just check every few months :) Well keep writing you a re very talented. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Once agai...Awesome material AND PWEEASE (yes i'm begging) update - imagine puppy dog eyes too! |