Reviews for Promises
25435345gb chapter 39 . 5/29/2015
So well done - I love how Sari was finally honest, what a beautiful restoration for these two.
25435345gb chapter 28 . 5/29/2015
Good for Gavin! (even though by accepting her proposal in the first place, he's partly responsible for the mess) I'm glad he finally spelled it out straight for her. Hopefully Sari wakes up and smells the coffee.
25435345gb chapter 23 . 5/29/2015
Sari is such a selfish dumbass. She's willing to bring a child into the world with this man, but she won't have sex with him. Wasting thousands of dollars on an expensive treatment. Lying to physicians about things that could potentially affect her health. At least she seems somewhat self-aware of her selfishness, but too stubborn to give in I guess.
25435345gb chapter 20 . 5/29/2015
Sari's selfishness has no end! I have no idea how Gavin is just able to lay down next to her like it's nothing.
25435345gb chapter 14 . 5/29/2015
I'm glad she's expressed her gratitude to Gavin, good on her.
25435345gb chapter 12 . 5/29/2015
Wow, the selfishness of this woman, willing to bring a child into the world, knowingly depriving it of two parents who are in a stable marriage. And making all these demands of Gavin - girl, you should be licking his boots, he didn't have to do anything for you.
sneaky-fox chapter 41 . 7/4/2012
I can't believe this hasn't got 5000 reviews. It is an amazing story and so filled with emotions that you had me laughing and crying throughout.
I have to admit that I often wanted to slap Sari for being cruel to Gavin (even though it wasn't her intention) he is such a lovable character and deserves all the happiness he can get :)... now I really want a "Gavin" for myself.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story, it will definitely not be the last time I read it!
non.graceful chapter 41 . 7/4/2011
The ending wasn't as sad or heartbreaking like it should have been but it'll suffice.

Gavin and Sari's relationship didn't seem as strong towards the ending like it had on the beginning.

I loved this story.

A few typos head and there.
non.graceful chapter 7 . 7/4/2011
That was a sweet chapter ;)
DeadlyGlamourous chapter 41 . 5/19/2011
i loveeeeee this story ;D omg haha i've planed on writing something similar to this but not like your idea. but ughh haha i love it :D let me know if you've gotten anything published :D
AuraVybrid chapter 41 . 9/3/2010
Sniff, sniff, sniffle. this story was so beautiful, romantic, sad this was a roller-coaster of brilliance and significance. thank you for sharing.-Aura
SeaJade Song chapter 41 . 6/13/2010
this is such a sweet story!
MareRox chapter 41 . 6/1/2009
that was AMAZING!

i laughed and cried and was frusturated

ur an amazing author
gyabo chapter 41 . 4/10/2009
omg. i absolutely loved this story. very touching.
ginabella59 chapter 41 . 11/8/2008
It was a beautiful story.

Ty for enjoyed my day.
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