I've always loved your stories, but I have to say this one definitely shows that you are evolving and maturing as a writer. Even the main character...a 32 year old woman as opposed to a teenager or early 20-something makes me think this one will be more than just a run-of-the-mill romance! I can't wait to read more!

A little slow and a little short, but the summery is definitly interesting, and the story is very well written; very clear. I just think that the chapters should be longer and that the plot you described in your summery come into play more. Keep writing, this looks like a very good story!