Reviews for Broken Skies
endless040 chapter 1 . 6/25/2003
amazing poem. just awesome. Great format. good job. especially love the lines of

"And i, like prey

Have no chance of winning" nice
Groovy Angel chapter 1 . 6/25/2003
Wow I love it. The rhyme is really effective and it's a very well written job. The think the imagery is powerful (mainly the nature imagery - ice, sun, flowers, desert, sky) Well done ;o)