Reviews for Once In A Lifetime
distantorigin chapter 1 . 8/11/2004
interesting... you must have some really scary dreams sometimes if this is one of them. anyway, this is a good read! :) and thanks for reviewing mine too. hope you don't abandon it. _
girl-23 chapter 1 . 8/10/2004
Hey! Thanks for reading my story "Everything is Better with Ben" and I'm glad you like it, I'll update soon hopefully. About the swearing though, that story actually has the least swearing.. LOL, I tend to have my characters swear just to make it more real, I'm not going to write about 18 year olds who don't ever swear. Because we do.
Anyway, this was well written and interesting, and I like the way it ended. I'm going to read more of your stuff right now. Thanks again.
Laura
Little Comet chapter 1 . 8/9/2004
Very good story. A couple thoughts: Why does the point of view change so often, and what is the purpose of him taking her from that room to another?
L.C.
Ingridtk chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
That nasty old Trey!You have interesting dreams, very unlike mine!